In class we started to write 3 persuasive writings our first and second ones were only for practice but are third one was the real one. For my third persuasive writing I choose buying a vending machine. From my first and second to my third persuasive essay I have change my punctuation- Capital letters, 4 or more sentences and letter endings. I think that I have convinced the principal to buy a vending machine for I.I.C.S.
Below is my 3 persuasive essay: